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I want to hold you in my arms;
like I did once.

Forever.

I want to see you smile;
like I do every day.

     Forever.

I want to look into your eyes;
like I’ve done so many times.

          Forever.

I want to tell you I love you,
like I’ve tried.

                And in time,
you’ll be mine.

I’ll kiss you under the moonlit sky,
underneath the stars.

                    Then you’ll be mine…
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Aborro Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
but the

"And in time,
you’ll be mine."

part doesn't really fit the composition, but it fits the wording, hard case...
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darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
o well
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:iconaborro:
Aborro Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the composition and it is really cute ^^
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darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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MissDarling23 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Student General Artist
This is really nice! :aww:
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darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! if i didn't already respond... v6 is so confusing!
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Willowwolf23 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Student General Artist
I like it, it's very well written. :nod:
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darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!
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xXxMorbidPrincessxXx Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
Aw! So...forceful<3
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darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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