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No Longer My Own by ~darkpiano7:icondarkpiano7:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


The lights are dim,
My voice has been turned off;
silenced,
by a crack of thunder.

The blinds are shut,
My eyes are closed;
blinded,
by the lightning that reaks havoc
on my soul.

I am merely a puppet,
controlled by somebody else.
I am lost,
neither here,
nor there.

I am trapped in the quicksand of torture;
stuck until I breach,
and slide beneath the surface.
I shall then be no more.

I am no longer my own,
taken over by you.
I am no longer my own,
hated by life.
I am no longer my own,
controlled in debt.
I am no longer my own,
I have no strife.

I am no longer my own,
but am soon to break free.
I am no longer my own,
but no longer yours.
I am no longer my own,
stuck in the void.
I am no longer my own,
but I can, and will be...
©2008-2009 ~darkpiano7
:icondarkpiano7:

Author's Comments

Like my friend, :iconnekocat2018:, I was bored in class today (Tech Ed, not Chorus... but trust me, I was bored in Chorus, too), so I came up with some ideas and started writing.

Hope ya like!

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~AngelPet34 Apr 1, 2008, 1:53:33 PM
:clap: I like it....Tech Ed was soooo boring...she could have let us pick our assigned seats :(

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:hug: Hugs are like band-aids... they fix things that are hurt or broken :hug:
"They said suicide, and I said gremlin, so I ended up here (Insane Asylum)" - Spiderwick
"Can we eat the *re* Freshmen *ts* now?" -Principal at a loud high school orientation
:iconsandg1rl:
Mood: Obsessed ~SandG1rL Apr 1, 2008, 2:02:29 PM
Don't be afraid to be yourself! If we were all the same, life would be boring! Break free from the chain that ties you down. If you don't have freedom, you don't have life. I want you to live, so don't give up! Keep moving, and play that funky music! :giggle: I want to dance. Will you join me?

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My imaginary friend is my Guardian ANGEL!
:iconblackrose23:
~BlackRose23 Apr 1, 2008, 2:38:36 PM
Beautiful poem! :heart: God, Tech Ed was so very dull. I hope it gets a bit more exciting in the future!

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When you knew that it was over
Were you suddenly aware
That the autumn leaves were turning
To the colour of her hair?
Windmills Of Your Mind
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~animefreak1713 Apr 1, 2008, 2:49:29 PM
how do u get ur writing like that???? sorry i'm kinda new

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"Practice makes perfect but nobody's perfect so why practice?"
~Billie Joe Armstrong
:icondarkpiano7:
~darkpiano7 Apr 1, 2008, 3:20:39 PM
yeah, she could have...that would have been a lot better.

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~darkpiano7 Apr 1, 2008, 3:21:45 PM
lol

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~darkpiano7 Apr 1, 2008, 3:22:54 PM
i hope so too

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Mood: Content ~nekocat2018 Apr 1, 2008, 3:37:18 PM
Like :iconblackrose23: and :iconangelpet34:said Tech Ed was a bore.
Nice Poem!

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For me, the knowledge is torture.
For you, the ignorance is bliss.
-Ignorance is Bliss
:iconangelpet34:
~AngelPet34 Apr 1, 2008, 4:13:12 PM
*sigh* I have to sit in the front, next to Joe, and my ex-best friend is next to him :rage:

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:hug: Hugs are like band-aids... they fix things that are hurt or broken :hug:
"They said suicide, and I said gremlin, so I ended up here (Insane Asylum)" - Spiderwick
"Can we eat the *re* Freshmen *ts* now?" -Principal at a loud high school orientation
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