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So sick of your bitching and moaning;
I’m just tired of your crying and groaning.
Sitting there complaining and whining.
All of it just makes me feel like dying.

I,
Cannot take this anymore;
Would you just walk out the door?
Please leave me here alone,
I wish you were never known.
Just stop being so damn gruff,
I’ve had enough!

We vowed under God till death do us part.
Who knew it would just be so hard?
I thought I knew all your thoughts and your feelings;
But all I know is your hatreds and brainless way of thinking.

I,
Cannot take this anymore;
Would you just walk out the door?
Please leave me here alone,
I wish you were never known.
Just stop being so damn gruff,
I’ve had enough!

Do you think I care what you say to me?
Do you think I care about anything?
There’s no one like you,
Who can be so  
Regrettable
Un-intellectual,
Unbelievably
Untenable!

I,
Cannot take this anymore;
Would you just walk out the door?
Please leave me here alone,
I wish you were never known.
Just stop being so damn gruff,
I’ve had enough! I,
Cannot take this anymore;
Would you just walk out the door?
Please leave me here alone,
I wish you were never known.
Just stop being so damn gruff,
I’ve had enough!
I was listening to "Enough" by Disturbed today, and I got the idea to write this. :D

Hope you like!
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:iconplankrider:
Plankrider Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008
WOW! Thats really good!
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:icondarkpiano7:
darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks! :D
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:iconxxxmorbidprincessxxx:
xXxMorbidPrincessxXx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008
Disturbed is a very inspirational group...^^
Awesome Boo, I love it!<3
You showed that mofo!!!
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:iconwhitefire806:
Whitefire806 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008
Yay Disturbed! Yay Poem! good poem!
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:icondarkpiano7:
darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks! and Yay Disturbed!
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:icondominantdoberman:
DominantDoberman Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008   Photographer
awesome! :D
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:icondarkpiano7:
darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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:iconwillowwolf23:
Willowwolf23 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Student General Artist
Wow, it's very good! You definitely got out the anger! :nod:
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:icondarkpiano7:
darkpiano7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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:iconaborro:
Aborro Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I like!
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